You need to make the piano enter in your waving background sound. It's like if the piano was killing all other sounds, you need to put im part of the rest of the song. Put more reverb and soften it, I assure you it will sound better :)
Continue, hope to hear more :)
I'll go over the crappy quality of the song and say that you have nice synth, but try to vary it more, or add something else. it's like always the same thing over and over. I know that the basslinesurely sounds better with nice quality but I can't judge it because I can't hear it well. but it's pretty nice :)
Well, nice beginning, but try to vary the synth line along your song. it's like it's always the same thing. Add another bassline, more powerfull and sidechain it with your kick, you'll see, this will make the difference.
Keep it up :)
thank you for the advice, im already making more progress on it. ill be releasing the final version in a few days.
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